Thoughts on Writing

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I read a lot of posts on the writing forums about what to write, or how to write it, and it got me thinking. Is there truly a right way to write your book? And the answer has to be no! Here’s why:

Each person has their own style of writing (or what people like to call ‘voice’), which involves everything from sentence structure, complexity of vocabulary or thoughts. These are what separate lets’ say Stephen King from Clive Cussler or Hemingway from Faulkner.

I remember reading about Hemingway and Faulkner having their famous feud over various issues, with writing style being one of the biggest issues.

Faulkner made the comment:

He has never been known to use a word that might send a reader to the dictionary.

Now I take umbrage with that because I don’t care to send a reader to the dictionary either. Why do so when there’s plenty of words to get your point across that are simpler? Plus, in this age of dumbing down of people, a lot of readers may or may not even understand what you’re saying in the first place. So, why do so? You know what I mean? I, like King, think that writing is about enriching another persons life, not trying to show how much knowledge of Mirriam-Webster you have.

If you as a writer think that creating a novel is all about you and stroking your ego, then you’ve got the entire process of art wrong. Art is not done for the attention but for creative release and the enjoyment of others. Once again, I have to agree with this King quote:

“Writing isn’t about making money, getting famous, getting dates, getting laid, or making friends. In the end, it’s about enriching the lives of those who will read your work, and enriching your own life, as well. It’s about getting up, getting well, and getting over. Getting happy, okay? Getting happy.”

Getting yourself, and the reader happy, is the most important part of artistry-and that’s just how it is.

As for the Faulkner-Hemingway battle, I’m not through talking about that. Ernest had a shot to fire back over the comment about the dictionary:

Poor Faulkner. Does he really think big emotions come from big words? He thinks I don’t know the ten-dollar words. I know them all right. But there are older and simpler and better words, and those are the ones I use.

I’m personally on the side of Hemingway in this battle. I write simply and to the point. Long, complex sentences allow me more opportunity to screw something up or have to do a major editing to carry out to get it correct. With that said, I chose to use the simple words and simple sentences.

Sometimes the KISS formula is the best one.

Happy writing!

 

Silly questions

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I was cruising the forums and someone was commenting about how a lot of beginning writers like to ask “what do you think about b’ab blah, blah?” What a ridiculous question to continually ask! The only one who knows if something is good or not is you the writer and any agent it’s sent off to.

What I really find silly are the ones who are worried about whether or not their writing is politically correct. Huh?? I have to agree with Stephen King’s quote:

“if you expect to succeed as a writer, rudeness should be the second-to-least of your concerns. The least of all should be polite society and what it expects. If you intend to write as truthfully as you can, your days as a member of polite society are numbered, anyway.”

Writing, like any art, has a tendency to shake society with its impact, so why worry about what others think? Unless you’re in a country that limits your ability to have free speech, write how you feel and be happy with it. Remember:

“Writing isn’t about making money, getting famous, getting dates, getting laid, or making friends. In the end, it’s about enriching the lives of those who will read your work, and enriching your own life, as well. It’s about getting up, getting well, and getting over. Getting happy, okay? Getting happy.”

Happy Writing.

Why aren’t there more women writers in Science Fiction

This article is courtesy of slate.com.

I’m not privy to the results of their surveys, but it seems to be be 50-50 or 40-60 in favor of men in my local Barnes and Noble science fiction and fantasy section. However, with the said, mine might not the representative of them all.

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It’s been well established that publishing is not a great place to be if you’re a woman.VIDA’s 2012 report on the proportion of men and women reviewed and reviewing at major magazines was just as bleak as usual. Geek culture can be equally unwelcoming to women, as recent events have shown. But what about the intersection of the two—science fiction and fantasy publishing?

The online magazine Strange Horizons has just published a study that applies VIDA’s methodology to sci-fi and fantasy publications, and it shows pretty much what you’d expect. Of 14 publications surveyed, only one reviewed books by women more than 50 percent of the time. (That was Cascadia Subduction Zone, which has the specific goal of “[treating] work by women as vital and central rather than marginal.”) Five of the publications devoted less than 25 percent of their coverage to books by women. The ratio of men to women among reviewers was similarly discouraging: Although three of the magazines employed more woman reviewers than men, seven had less than half as many women as men, and two publications had no female reviewers at all. (Admittedly, those last two publications had only four reviewers between them.)

These data are similar to what VIDA found in more mainstream publications, where only the literary magazine Tin House had more female contributors than male ones. (The New York Times Book Review deserves note for having 327 female reviewers to 400 male ones). Many of the reasons for and effects of those statistics hold across the genres as well. Male writers submit more short fiction, and are more willing to promote themselves. Most editors are men. The most popular and respected authors also tend to be male, as China Miéville, Neil Gaiman, and Brandon Sanderson can attest.

But considering fantasy and science fiction writing only as a microcosm of the larger publishing world misses the more complex dynamics that contribute to women’s position in the industry. I’ve so far been lumping together sci-fi and fantasy—and it’s true the line between them can be fuzzy.  But there’s actually a considerable gap between how many women write novels classified as straight science fiction and how many write novels classified as fantasy or some combination of the two. Only about a quarter of science fiction novels are written by women; for fantasy and combination novels, it’s closer to half. This gap suggests that women writers are running up against the same division that causes so much trouble for us in other corners of the geek universe: the split between hardcore and casual fans.

As Game of Thrones has shown, mainstream audiences can embrace even the most labyrinthine epic fantasy. But that’s unlikely to be true for hard science fiction, much of which is heavily focused on scientific accuracy and plausibility. Hard sci-fi is not the only kind of science fiction, but the qualities it champions are profoundly important to a vocal subset of fans. Most people unfamiliar with science fiction, on the other hand, are not overly excited to read about the inner workings of a plasma engine. Even Miéville’s acclaimed novel Embassytown focuses on how the linguistic differences between races affect their relationship. As fascinating as the challenge of cross-species communication may be to some (myself included), it demands the kind of specialized knowledge you don’t need to appreciate, say, royal scheming and swordfights.

Just as women struggle to be taken seriously as scientists, they may struggle to be seen as writers of “real” science fiction. But for some, avoiding the bubble of hardcore fantasy and sci-fi has been a major boon. The three most successful fantasy authors of the past decade—J.K. Rowling, Suzanne Collins, and Stephenie Meyer—are women.* Similarly, the science fiction and fantasy writers embraced by mainstream literary culture are often women: Kelly Link, Susannah Clarke, and even Margaret Atwood have made their careers by straddling the line between genre and literary fiction.

Of course, as the VIDA numbers show, literary fiction can be an equally challenging environment for women. Whatever the reasons, whatever the genre, woman writers are still at a disadvantage.

*Correction, April 25, 2013: This post originally misspelled Stephenie Meyers’ first name.

Starting Your Book With Exposition

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A lot of people are asking if they should start their novel off with exposition and the answer is no! Do not take those first 5-6 precious paragraphs you need to catch a reader’s attention and waste them on useless narration. Do not put back story into them. In fact, you don’t have to write the back story in all at one time. Dribble it out! For example: I got an entire back story built for Talia, but I only let it out in drips and dribs over all of the novels with her. Plus, I’ll run a subplot that deals with something in her past that’s relevant to the current novel to help spread out the background. Keep in mind Stephen King’s quote on the subject:

“The most important things to remember about back story are that (a) everyone has a history and (b) most of it isn’t very interesting.”

So, don’t waste that valuable time on needless things.

 

List of Sci Fi Novels Dropping in July

 

Hardcover:

 

 

Elisha Barber – E. C. Ambrose

 

Storm Surge – Taylor Anderson

 

Bloodfire Quest – Terry Brooks

 

Witch Wraith – Terry Brooks

 

Star Wars: Crucible – Troy Denning

 

The Year’s Best Science Fiction: Thirtieth Annual Collection – Gardner Dozois, Ed.

 

On the Razor’s Edge – Michael Flynn

 

The Ocean at the End of the Lane – Neil Gaiman

 

Carpathian – David Golemon

 

Thieves’ Quarry – D. B. Jackson

 

Fifth Grave Past the Light – Darynda Jones

 

Kill City Blues – Richard Kadrey

 

Love in the Time of Metal and Flesh – Jay Lake

 

The Executioner’s Heart – George Mann

 

Evening’s Empires – Paul McAuley

 

Sir Hereward and Mister Mitz: Three Adventures – Garth Nix

 

The Long War – Terry Pratchett & Stephen Baxter

 

Blood Song – Anthony Ryan

 

The Age of Ice – J. M. Sidorova

 

World of Warcraft: Vol’jin: Shadows of the Horde – Michael Stackpole

 

Fiend – Peter Stenson

 

Neptune’s Brood – Charles Stross

 

Theatre of the Gods – M. Suddain

 

Anarchy – James Treadwell

 

Two Fronts – Harry Turtledove

 

Beginnings – David Weber

 

The Night of the Hunter – Davis Grubb, Patrick Loehr, Paul Wedlake & Joe R. Lansdale

 

Storm Riders – Margaret Weis & Robert Krammes

 

Chimera – David Wellington

 

The Best of Connie Willis – Connie Willis

 

 

Trade Paperback:

 

 

Wastelands II: More Stories of the Apocalypse – John Joseph Adams

 

The Mammoth Book of Black Magic – Mike Ashley, Ed.

 

The Mammoth Book of Time Travel SF – Mike Ashley, Ed.

 

Nightfall – Robyn Bachar

 

Turbulence – Samit Basu

 

This is How You Die: Stories of the Inscrutable, Infallible, Inescapable Machine of Death – Matthew Bennardo, David Malki & Ryan North

 

Bad Seeds: Evil Progeny – Steve Berman, Ed.

 

Carniepunk: Parlor Tricks – Rachel Caine, Jennifer Estep +

 

Interrupt – Jeff Carlson

 

Ex-Communication – Peter Clines

 

Doctor Who: Dark Horizons – J. T. Colgan

 

The Great White Space – Basil Cooper

 

Trinity Rising – Elspeth Cooper

 

Warhammer 40K: The Emperor’s Gift – Aaron Dembski-Bowden

 

Crazy in the Blood – Lucienne Diver

 

William Shakespeare’s Star Wars – Ian Doescher

 

Warhammer: The Best of Hammer & Bolter Vol 2 – Christian Dunn

 

The Eternal Flame – Greg Egan

 

Herald of the Storm – Richard Ford

 

The Twin Princes – Ja’Nell Fowler

 

Warhammer 40K: Ahriman: Exile – John French

 

Against Gravity – Gary Gibson

 

Angel Stations – Gary Gibson

 

Three Parts Dead – Max Gladstone

 

The Glass God – Kate Griffin

 

The Mammoth Book of Angels and Demons – Paula Guran, Ed.

 

Warhammer: Skarsnik – Guy Haley

 

Death’s Excellent Vacation – Charlaine Harris & Toni Kelner, Ed.

 

Into the Woods – Kim Harrison

 

The Secret of Abdu El Yezdi – Mark Hodder

 

The Year’s Best Science Fiction & Fantasy 2013 – Rich Horton, Ed.

 

Noah’s Boy – Sarah Hoyt

 

Imaginarium 2013: The Best Canadian Speculative Writing – Sandra Katsuri, & Samantha Bieko, Ed.

 

A Once Crowded Sky – Tom King

 

Mist – Susan Krinard

 

Lord of Slaughter – M. D. Lachlan

 

Wolf in Shadow – John Lambshead

 

A Liaden Universe Collection, Vol I – Sharon Lee & Steve Miller

 

Fire Logic – Laurie Marks

 

The Delphi Room – Melia McClure

 

The White Forest – Adam McOmber

 

Myths & Legends: King Arthur – Daniel Mersey & Alan Lathwell

 

Beloved Stranger – Janet Miller

 

Cold Copper – Devon Monk

 

Blood and Feathers: Rebellion – Lou Morgan

 

On Her Majesty’s Behalf – Joseph Nassise

 

The Constantine Afflictio – T. Aaron Payton

 

Forged in Fire – J. A. Pitts

 

Snuff – Terry Pratchett

 

Romulus Buckle & the City of the Founders – Richard Ellis Preston, Jr.

 

The Other Place – J. B. Priestley

 

Lady of the Glen – Jennifer Roberson (reprint)

 

The Initiate Brother Duology – Sean Russell

 

Was – Geoff Ryman

 

Degrees of Wrong – Anna Scarlett

 

Split at the Seams – Yolanda Sfetsos

 

Dragonwitch – Anne Elisabeth Stengl

 

Big Iron – C. A. Suleiman

 

The Coldest War – Ian Tregillis

 

Coup d’Etat – Harry Turtledove

 

The Melancholy of Mechagirl – Catherynne Valente

 

The Sorcerer’s Widow – Lawrence Watt-Evans

 

The Black Prism – Brent Weeks

 

Long Fall From Heaven – George Weir & Milton Burton

 

Warhammer: Blighted Empire – Clint Lee Werner

 

Warhammer: Dead Winter – Clint Lee Werner

 

The Thousand Names – Django Wexler

 

Countdown City – Ben Winters

 

The End of the Dream – Philip Wylie

 

The Legend of Snow Wolf: Redemption – F. Lit Yu

 

 

Mass Market Paperback:

 

 

The D’neeran Factor – Terry Adams

 

Iron Gray Sea – Taylor Anderson

 

Magic Rises – Ilona Andrews

 

Dancing with the Devil – Keri Arthur

 

Harbinger – Philippa Ballantine

 

This Case is Gonna Kill Me – Phillipa Bornikova

 

Satan’s Reach – Eric Brown

 

The Traitor Queen – Trudi Canavan

 

Wicked Bronze Ambition – Glen Cook

 

Pile of Bones – Bailey Cunningham

 

Fringe: The Burning Man – Christa Faust

 

Pathfinder Tales: The Wizard’s Mask – Ed Greenwood

 

Viral Nation – Shaunta Grimes

 

Forsaken by the Others – Jess Haines

 

Assignment in Eternity – Robert Heinlein (reprint)

 

The Big Reap – Chris Holm

 

The Darwin Elevator – Jason Hough

 

Pacific Rim – Alex Irvine

 

Thieftaker – D. B. Jackson

 

Phoenicia’s Worlds – Ben Jeapes

 

Rise of the Gryphon – Sherrilyn Kenyon & Dianna Love

 

King of Thrones – Mark Lawrence

 

Helen & Troy’s Epic Road Quest – Lee Martinez

 

Warhammer 40K: Angel Exterminatus – Graham McNeill

 

Fate of Worlds – Larry Niven & Edward Lerner

 

Ice and Shadow – Andre Norton (reprint)

 

Last Blood – Kristen Painter

 

Seawitch – Kat Richardson

 

Queen of Wands – John Ringo

 

A Cursed Embrace – Cecy Robson

 

Vicious Moon – Lee Roland

 

White Trash Zombie Apocalypse – Diana Rowland

 

Forgotten Realms: Stone of Tymora – R. A. Salvatore & Geno Salvatore

 

A Conspiracy of Alchemists – Liesel Schwarz

 

Kitty in the Underworld – Carrie Vaughn

 

Star Trek: From History’s Shadow – Dayton Ward

 

Hungry Like a Wolf – Christine Warren

 

Midst Toil and Tribulation – David Weber

 

I Don’t Want to Kill You – Dan Wells

 

The Renegade – Jack Whyte

 

The Dirty Streets of Heaven – Tad Williams

 

 

eBook:

 

 

The Guardian’s Witch – Ruth Casie

 

Never Deal with Dragons – Lorenda Christensen

 

Scythe Does Matter – Gina X. Grant

 

The Quiet Earth – Craig Harrison (reprint)

 

Battle Station – B. V. Larson

 

The Monsters in Your Neighbourhood – Jesse Petersen

 

Sky Hunter – Fae Sutherland

 

Celebromancy – Michael Underwood

 

Time Rep – Peter Ward

 

Desperate Magic – Rebecca York
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